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I’ve been clinging onto you for so long,
That when I try to live without you, I can’t breathe.
Oh, you make everything better, whole.
I can’t believe how you turn my world around
But all good things, must come to an end, they say,
And I know this won’t last.
It’ll break my heart and shatter my soul,

And I’ll cry….
I’ll cry…
And I’m falling ….
I’m falling from grace…

I look in the mirror and I see my falling tears.
And my heart crumbles as I think of what you said
You lied to me,
You told me we’d be together forever.
And now you’re gone
And I’m losing my mind altogether.

And I can’t bear,
The thought of us not being together
And I can’t help
Feeling this way and crying, oh,

I’ll cry….
I’ll cry….
And I’m falling…
I’m falling…oh
Falling….
I’m falling,
yeah I’m falling
i'm falling....
i'm falling.....
I’m falling from grace
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This is a re-write of Breathe No More by Evanescence ^_^
This was inspired by something that happened to me a few weeks ago
tell me what you think, please :D
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Oooh, very good! *hug* Impressive!
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~x-xLithiumx-x Sep 25, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you! :D :hug:
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*LivingThroughALens Sep 24, 2008  Student Photographer
OMIGOSH! This is better than anything i have ever written! I don't know the tune of it but i made one up and i was singing along! it is beautiful!
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~x-xLithiumx-x Sep 24, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
well, the tune is the same as Breathe No More by evanescence. but i mean, its more original if you make up your own. lol. originally this was a re-write but i'd love to write my own tune. lol
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*LivingThroughALens Sep 25, 2008  Student Photographer
hehe. Well, i love the concept of it...keep up the good work
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~x-xLithiumx-x Sep 25, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thankies very much :D
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*LivingThroughALens Sep 25, 2008  Student Photographer
You aer welcomies! "D
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